Q4: your evaluation starts very abruptly- Sabrina- can you put a clearer introduction stating that you are writing about research as this is unclear.
Leyla= your response is too short. please add more information.
Overall, it needs a bit more time spending on it to sort out some issues with the layout, and finally, can you please choose some nicer colours- the ones you've chosen hurt my eyes- this work needs to look visually pleasing, and it doesn't.
Q3: Sabrina- your work is very descriptive- try to analyse the usefulness of the feedback that you got.
Monique- your response is too short.
Leyla- good content but very short.
jide- you've only written a few lines. plus one of your print screen contains comments that would be very offensive to muslims- plus- what does that part add to our understanding of feedback anyway? please spend longer on your homework!
I haven't checked Q 2 or 1 yet.
You have loads of Q4 posts with a draft image on them- can you sort this out please- they'll need deleting.
